Vision: I agree with *AgentCoke on this it is to the point and it's simple and not distracting on what you are trying to get across.
Originality: I like how it's to the point but also again it in someways it's very simple to do I think you would want to make it different and unique. I think it would be interesting to have a silhouette of two people possibly against a bright background then have the words at an angle in the corner or something using that same sheet of paper. But just a thought
Technique: I like the fact that the photograph though is crisp up front and the background isn't distracting because then it disrupts from the main point.
Impact: Thank you for sharing this quote with me I think in a way if people read things like this more often we wouldn't look anymore down on people but instead how we ourselves should look at each other as equals because even though we may be of different colors, shapes, and sizes we are all one thing in common we are all humans. :] I think it does make an impact especially the words.
Vision Vision is great - it's certainly all and all obvious of the point you're trying to get across, and it's expressed well, s great job there!
Originality Unfortunately, there really isn't too much originality in writing a quote on a piece of paper that you're holding in your hand. Maybe if you were to capture it sitting somewhere, perhaps under or in a tree maybe, it would be more original in that sense and stand out more.
Technique Technique wise, pretty good! Although it is hard to mess up something like this, which is why I knocked off a half point. But the image quality is good and you can read the writing fine. I like the blurred background especially - It gives it a nice background without taking away from the foreground.
Impact It's a great quote and I like it, quite a strong message going through. Not much to say about this one really
What if it's to acknowledge what not to do/be; vice, it seems, is easiest discovered in oneself by seeing others who are victims of it. So I often look down on people but I also look up to people. Acknowledging the inequality of humanity is healthy, denial turns people to relativism.
I agree with *AgentCoke on this it is to the point and it's simple and not distracting on what you are trying to get across.
Originality:
I like how it's to the point but also again it in someways it's very simple to do I think you would want to make it different and unique. I think it would be interesting to have a silhouette of two people possibly against a bright background then have the words at an angle in the corner or something using that same sheet of paper. But just a thought
Technique:
I like the fact that the photograph though is crisp up front and the background isn't distracting because then it disrupts from the main point.
Impact:
Thank you for sharing this quote with me I think in a way if people read things like this more often we wouldn't look anymore down on people but instead how we ourselves should look at each other as equals because even though we may be of different colors, shapes, and sizes we are all one thing in common we are all humans. :] I think it does make an impact especially the words.
Vision is great - it's certainly all and all obvious of the point you're trying to get across, and it's expressed well, s great job there!
Originality
Unfortunately, there really isn't too much originality in writing a quote on a piece of paper that you're holding in your hand. Maybe if you were to capture it sitting somewhere, perhaps under or in a tree maybe, it would be more original in that sense and stand out more.
Technique
Technique wise, pretty good! Although it is hard to mess up something like this, which is why I knocked off a half point. But the image quality is good and you can read the writing fine. I like the blurred background especially - It gives it a nice background without taking away from the foreground.
Impact
It's a great quote and I like it, quite a strong message going through. Not much to say about this one really
Overall, really nice!
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